[DOSSIER N°203] Silla and the misty graves

Hi everybody !

 

 

 

Today I’m going to show you a story will I have wrote the last year… You know Silla and the misty graves ? It’s a story who spoke about a girl, Silla, and her very bad life ! I want to translate this in english because of the england’s readers !

So, you can read this in english if you don’t have understood in french !

 

The principle of my story is very simple, every day, a new chapter is published (unless I have not found the time)! The characters are added as the story goes. In the comments, tell us where you are in the story, please. Good reading !

 

 

 

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Characters

 


Silla : main character, student in biology, girl whose black eyes have golden reflections

Jordeus : one of the secondary characters

Ramon : one of the secondary characters, close friend of Jordeus

Edson : friend of Silla, brown boy with black eyes

Alison : girlfriend of Silla, twin of Adelina, girl rather coated with hair similar to straw

Adelina : girlfriend of Silla, twin of Alison, thin girl and little smart

Ofelia : friend of Adelina, native of northern Spain

 

Chapter I

 

 

« – Jordeus, I think I know why it is your niece who …
– My niece was unlucky, no more talk about that, you want.
– You can not forget it. Do you know what her parents had put on her?
« Do not talk about it any more, it’s a thing of the past.
– All right, whatever you want. « 

 

20 years ago

 

« Here, it’s you. »
– You know, we talk a lot about you right now …
« What could I have done to have this honor? »
– Haha! It’s often related to your horse … You know, Tango.
– I know. It’s sad.
(Silence) Well, you’re coming! The girls are waiting for you!
– I arrive. « 

 

 

This scene takes place in 1938 in Madrid, Spain. Silla was a biology student living with her parents and her older brother.

 

 

The student approached her friends who stared at her. Alison, a rather coated girl, asked her if it was all right. Adelina, Alison’s twin, asked her the same question with a minute’s lag. Silla felt uncomfortable despite the efforts of her comrades. Edson knew she was not going well, it was her friend since they entered the sixth. He offered her to play a game against him, which she accepted at once. Badminton was one of the favorite sports of this Madrid because it is played almost individually, at least, she never played as a team. The character of the young woman was very tense, it was enough to take a head so that she wanted the death of a person, and it got even worse during the games. Where she earned most of the time …

At the end of the game, Ofelia gave his opinion on the performance of each one, which particularly annoyed Silla. She told Edson that her service might have a little more energy and her opponent she was waiting too long before catching the wheel. However, no one said anything, we smiled at him. What she seemed to appreciate because she smiled in turn. The feelings of each were hidden in this small group. Edson walked away to call his grandfather.

« Hello? » Grandfather, can you hear me?
– Of course I hear you triple anouille! I’m not deaf yet, you know.
– Yes I know.
« Then tell me what you wanted so much to tell me! »
– Ah yes. It’s about my friend, you know, Silla. She has not been to university for a few days. His parents no longer had the means to pay him his horse, nobody could buy it from him. She took him to the slaughterhouse. « (…)

 

 

Chapter II

 

 

A week earlier …
That day, on a Wednesday night, Silla was at home. The latter did her homework while eating a chocolate bread as a dessert. The exercise proved to be very difficult. It dealt with the economy of Spain in 1920. This was a misunderstanding by the young woman who had been born four years before that year. She loved chocolate more than any prestigious dish, even in a vulgar bread. The student’s father was an employee of a large chocolate company. He had a lot of privileges because of his position as having free concert tickets in other free countries or almost any company’s products … His wife is a housewife, she took care of The house and his children when they were small. But she was ill, paralyzed, and therefore could not move, therefore. Elio, Silla’s big brother, had to watch over his mother day and night. The young woman, who was desperate by all these events, resigned herself to no longer speaking, and to remain alone. When she finally finished her exercise, she went to watch television. Without anyone, because his father was at work, and his mother in the hospital (his son was with him). She began by asking herself about the actuality, then, when she had had enough of the incessant tics of the presenters, it changed chain. The documentaries interested her very much, she looked at three in succession: one spoke of a dead owl while waiting for her companion, who had been captured by a man; The other of a family of rodents who had lost their house; And the last of a pigeon without wings. Elio, on the other hand, hated this…

 

 

 

Oooh ! Sorry, I haven’t finished to write this story !:cry: But, you can tell me « Continue ! Continue » in messages !

 

Well, see you soon in a new article ! 😛 😀 🙂

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